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LOVE TRIANGLE

shaiontheprowl by shaiontheprowl
December 3, 2013
in POETRY
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This is a tribute to a story by one of the most beautiful ladies I ever met. She had written a fantastic story which had ‘ gripped’ my heart in ways I couldn’t imagine.

The title : I loved her…she loved another! 

truly captures the essence of some relationships out there.

It is a sad story, but a beautiful one all the same.

So, I thought I would spin it out in a different way. A poetic way. I hope I did justice….

Be the judge.

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May 23, 2012                  4.15 p.m

A shrill scream rent the midnight air

Heavy with the depth of pain weighed down in heavy sorrow

The cry of a dying heart in utter despair

Caused by a loss it fails to swallow.

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If only time could be borrowed

Just so words uttered foolishly could be recanted

If only I could make up for all the wrong bends followed

Go on a journey to reclaim that word which gnarled at the heart and left it so disjointed.

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If only I listened to the cries of the night birds

Singing of a love which already had gone sour

If only I had seen clearly the silent pledge

Telling me she indeed loved another.

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This love triangle shouldn’t have happened

If I had seen that which in the distant eyes sparkled;

Clearly I love her, but she loves another.

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Comments 5

  1. Babyada says:
    11 years ago

    Really, there’s hardly any adult that isn’t in one relationship or the other. But that doesn’t mean they’re with the right person, or the person they actually like/love. That’s not enough reason to draw the conclusion that they love another. Unless, they tell you verbatim that they’re not ready to leave the other person, I see no reason why one shouldn’t try anyone he or she likes.

    My own opinion sha.

    Reply
  2. teewah says:
    11 years ago

    A job well done shai…and thanks for the mention

    Reply
    • theshaione says:
      11 years ago

      You got it gong on *winks*

      Reply
  3. gooseberry says:
    10 years ago

    I love your unique style of writing poetry… Sometimes, we find ourselves loving another or being the victim in the triangle… It hurts but that’s life. I’ll prefer a love square sha, lol. Great job.

    Reply
    • theshaione says:
      10 years ago

      Well, even being in d center don’t help much….

      Reply

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